This was pretty good!
Has a bit of an Adventure Time feel to it, which I totally like.
The animation and art style was pretty good.
Voice acting was excellent.
The story felt a little rushed.... but maybe its because I haven't seen the first episode yet.
I hope you continue the series!
...and Thanks for sharing with us on Newgrounds!
Thankyou so much. Im inproving my skills with each animation and I hope you stay tuned for episode 3. Mordacai and Rigby and finn and jake were huge inspirations when making Smitty and Thorns personality and friendship. Thats awesome you noticed. This episode I wanted to focus on expanding the world of Smitty through his conversation with Thorn and his encounter with Knightmare. It was meant to be short episode. It was basically to give exposition for whats to come and to get familiar with the world without having to explain a ton of info and throw it in your face (keep some mystery :D). I know I do need to work a little more on my story telling and the flow of my cartoons, and that will be something im working on for the next episode, but im glad I got to establish a foundation for whats to come. You guys know how strong Smitty can be from episode 1 and in episode 2 it focuses more on relationships and presenting a universal antagonist.
The animation was good.
...same with the voice acting.
....it just wasn't funny.
I love the elder scrolls universe and lore, and was really looking forward to ESO.
I participated in all the betas, and the game ended up being complete shit.
You are probably the only person this excited about the game, haha.
Nice animation tho.
A 1 minute ad played, followed by another 1 minute ad, before I was able to watch a 30 second animation.
What is wrong with this picture?
I think its just a huge coincidence..... but the masked fellow totally looks like Dad from Dad 'n' Me.
Tell me I'm not the only one who sees the resemblance.
Nice video, thanks for sharing!
Some of the animation was very well done...
The voice acting/the song lyrics were pretty bad.
Overall, It was just okay.
What are you doing Beebo?
BOOLSHIT YOU ARE SMOKING!
I love this series.
Thanks for adding a new episode!!!
Thanks for watching!
I really did not like this animation.
First and foremost...
Creating a MLP-themed flash is going to automatically divide your audience approval in half. I really do not enjoy the MLP in the slightest, and therefore I did not enjoy this animation as much as other members of your audience.
The animation itself seemed to be done fairly well, and I did award you some points there... but you lost a lot of potential points by repeating the same lame joke over and over...
and then there's the audio...
The audio is just outright obnoxious.
At no point during the animation did I appreciate the sounds coming out of my speakers, and in-fact I actually lowered my volume once I realized how poorly-recorded the voice acting was.
also... the white pony also seems to unoriginally mimic a certain South Park character's voice, mmkay...
Overall, this was just not my cup of tea.... I know there is a large fanbase of "bronies" who will love this... but the people who don't like MLP hate it.
I'm sure you are aware of which category of people I fall into.
I did not like it.
In my honest opinion, this was a mediocre flash.
The jokes weren't all that funny....
and the blatant self-advertising is not really a good way to captivate an audience...
Show this to someone who is not familiar with the flash author (Egoraptor), and they would ask you honestly if this flash was supposed to be funny.
Compared to the author's earlier submissions, this is terrible...
and if you ask me... the only reason this is getting glorified, is because it was submitted by Egoraptor.
Song is from a ytmnd...
A ytmnd that is from 2008.
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